Tuesday, November 5, 2013

Introductions

So I just started on my introduction and have been having a few issues with it. First off, getting it to really stand out has been a major pain. Grabbing the attention of my readers has always been a strong point of mine, but getting the intro to map out my entire paper, I feel, is very crucial. I will be working on this today and use the "painting a picture" technique. If there's time after all that chaos I will definitely work on some more descriptive techniques as it helps me describe what's going on in my head.

1 comment:

  1. I think you should start your conclusion with a question. I know that many people don't even know about this certain conflict. And your paper could raise awareness to this confusing situation. Maybe start off by saying "have you heard the news lately about? ....". Something like that would get me attention easily. Don't stress it, just skip it like i did....than go back later.

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