To a finish

As we get closer to a finish in this class, I can't help but to see the dramatic changes forming in my essay. The process of elimination has taken its place and my paper is looking different from when I first started. This semester has been pretty hard due to my personal life taking hold of my time, but I am trying to pull through it.

Introductions

So I just started on my introduction and have been having a few issues with it. First off, getting it to really stand out has been a major pain. Grabbing the attention of my readers has always been a strong point of mine, but getting the intro to map out my entire paper, I feel, is very crucial. I will be working on this today and use the "painting a picture" technique. If there's time after all that chaos I will definitely work on some more descriptive techniques as it helps me describe what's going on in my head.